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April 15, 2017 / edwardonbebop

Drunk

Its density and smooth texture filling my mouth
The thick liquid has broken through my lips
I taste the unique savor on my tongue.
Liquor running down my throat,
The scent rising to my nose.
I am intoxicated.
I drink
You.

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  1. leeniedevinity / Apr 15 2017 4:29 pm

    You’ve gone half the month! Congrats!

    • edwardonbebop / Apr 16 2017 6:23 pm

      I missed one day though (Thursday).
      I need to catch up with this.
      😀

  2. leeniedevinity / Apr 16 2017 7:02 pm

    You’re doing wonderfully. Do you think you’ll continue with your creative unburdening (perhaps not every day, of course) once the month-long challenge is over?

    • edwardonbebop / Apr 16 2017 7:08 pm

      Thank you my dear friend !
      🙂

      Now, that I got this in me, I don’t think I will stop. I may switch between poetry attempts and story-writing though.
      I think I would like to take some time after this 1 month period to read more poetry and read/learn about some “rules” or “theory” in order to improve myself a bit.
      So I guess the writing will slow down a bit.
      It has become a necessary part of my life though, so there will be no giving-up.
      😉

  3. edwardonbebop / Apr 16 2017 7:10 pm

    This post was initially intended to be about my taste for whisky.
    As the words came out (and given my somewhat naughty mind) I found out that ambiguity was created. I decided to go with it.

  4. leeniedevinity / Apr 16 2017 10:19 pm

    Never give up on your creativity. You’re a natural.
    Ambiguity is good. The reader can interpret a piece however it works for them, which may have nothing to do with what you intended.
    Re: your short stories … are you inclined to any particular genre?

    • edwardonbebop / Apr 17 2017 8:35 pm

      Short stories: I have tried “horror” (or rather “pulp”) stories but did not really like it.
      Otherwise… Ahem *blushing* erotica.
      I wrote short stories. A few months ago I started one that actually started to get bigger than intended (more than 20 pages) and turned out to be also more of a romantic kind and I am not confident in romance AT ALL !
      😀

  5. leeniedevinity / Apr 17 2017 9:11 pm

    You’ve entered a romantic relationship, so you’re not a green 20-year old.
    Erotica is tricky. How brave you are! The line between erotica and smut is sometimes a very fine one to walk.

    • edwardonbebop / Apr 17 2017 9:22 pm

      I wrote “erotica” in a generic way. I am not sure what side of the line I am on actually.
      I think most of the things I wrote in this genre feature some character discovery and growth (even limited) so maybe I don’t exactly fit in the scope of smut ?
      My last text and the longer-running one are definitely not “just” smut I guess.
      I should re-read the draft for the flash story I wrote and publish it maybe. I haven’t done so as some aspects of it are very personal to me.

  6. leeniedevinity / Apr 18 2017 9:29 pm

    Too bad you missed this. You may have found it interesting. http://www.nuitsduslam.fr/le-programme/toulouse-25-mars There may be another next year.

    • edwardonbebop / Apr 18 2017 9:47 pm

      I had no clue about the existence of this event !
      😮

      Good to know.
      🙂

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